Hosting a student for Job Shadow Day was a highlight over the holidays. Abby, a local middle school student, and I spent several hours together. We discussed the book she is writing and her desire to publish someday. She has a strong story and a bright future as an author.
I wasn’t sure what to expect from someone so young, but it certainly wasn’t an individual who knew the ins and outs of her characters. Abby knew how the individuals in her story would respond in any situation.
Knowing your characters is crucial in writing a good novel because characters move the plot of your story forward or cause the exciting twist you never saw coming. Not just their height, weight, hair color, or southern drawl or northern dialect matters, though visualizing the character is helpful. Digging deep into what makes your character tick—their goals, strengths, baggage, fears, etc.—influences how that character reacts, which keeps the reader engaged.
Writing can be like a Milli Vanilli concert. You push your story forward rather than letting your characters tell the story. You put words in your character’s mouths instead of allowing them to shine independently. When you do this, your characters fall flat, often stuck on repeat. (Insert groan if you’re from my generation.) A good author allows her characters the freedom to be who they are and shine on the page.
There’s one time when putting words into someone else’s mouth turns out perfectly. I’m not endorsing this video’s creator, but I’ve watched this content several times…and it always brings a smile.
Enjoy.
Sounds like it was a good experience for both of you!